Three tips for writing tough business emails #Human Resources#business communitations#email January 6 2012 | Ariel arielmstallings Don't be fooled by the green bow -- there's danger in this envelope. Fishfinned envelopes © by Sarabbit, used under Creative Commons license. When it comes down to writing tough business emails, my best advice can boil down to three action items: BEFORE: Have a very clear goal for the communication — what are you trying to get out of the message? What's the best case scenario? Be clear before you start writing. START: Open the discussion with a quick question/invitation to talk. A brief email to introduce your question/concern, inviting additional discussion is always easier to manage than a long dense email. END: Close big difficult emails with a clear call to action/invitation. Remember what your goal was at the beginning? Tell the recipient exactly how to make that happen. "I'd love to talk to you about how we can DO THIS THING" or even just "Can we figure out a way to make this less frustrating?" Reporter Name * Reporter Email * Original text Enter the original text here. Edited text* Enter your suggested copyedit here. Notes You can add a note for the editor here. * Required information. Fix Typo Ariel Author of the Offbeat Bride book, Ariel acts as the publisher of all the Offbeat Empire websites. She lives in Seattle with her son, and if she's not reading or writing books, chances are good that she's dancing or happy-crying. You can get to know her better on her Insta stories. PREVIOUS This website can't be everything to everyone NEXT Migration currently underway: lessons being learned Show/Hide comments [ 3 ] I think I'm going to print this out and put it next to my work computer. I think this may just be the best way of looking at any kind of adult conflict resolution. I'd say put the call to action at the top. People often don't make it to the bottom of the email. It's happened to me before. I go back to an email I read a day or two earlier to take action on it, and on a second more-thorough reading I find "can you please get back to me today?" at the very bottom. Especially if you need something done quickly — "We're trying to get this to the designer today, can I please get your feedback by 4?" should be the first line. Comments are closed.